Monday, 28 April 2014

#440 ~ The Job Offer

The Job OfferThe Job Offer by Eleanor Webb

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I featured this as one of my DSOA picks way back in April 2013, and at the time of writing this review it's still available as a free download on Amazon.

It was a sweet, and uncomplicated contemporary romance, that was really enjoyable to read.

Although it was the first time that I've reading anything by this author, but it won't be the last.

Product Details

Still available at the time of this post as a free Kindle Download.

225 pages
Indie Writer (Self-published)
Fiction, Contemporary, Romance

Errors/Bug Bears

There were a few, but nothing too major.

"gotten" at least twice that I noticed.

Loc 157:  You are supposed tell your best friend - to tell.

Loc 892:  She came outside wearing a Capri of white Capri pants, a yellow button down short sleeve sheet, and ... - shirt.

Loc 1057:  Chelsea's cheeks were red, and she blue eyes were bright ... - her.

Loc 1198:  He was breathing heavy, and she could feel ... - heavily.

Loc 1506:  After putting his hand on her low back ... - lower.

Loc 2161:  ... and he had the most power orgasm he had ever experienced - powerful.

Loc 2658:  She chose not to wear a vale - veil.

Loc 2676: ... white Rolls Royce limousine - snort, this one really made me laugh, it's just a Rolls Royce, no limousine required!

Loc 2758:  She sold yourself to you, Ben, so that she could get a job at Stanford Enterprises - herself.

Happy reading.



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