A Hidden Fire by Elizabeth HunterMy rating: 5 of 5 stars
Book #1: Elemental Mysteries Series
Nice slow burn romance, with an unusual twist on the fantasy creature side of things.
Some nice snappy writing, and decent dialogue.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, and would happily read more by Ms Hunter. She will be added to my WTR list.
This was a DSOA on my Blog in April 2014, thus it was free at the time. I would be more than happy to pay for this one though.
Product Details
A DSOA pick back in April 2013 - do not adjust your screen, I am a year behind with my reading.
It was free at the time, and is still showing at this point in time HERE as a free Kindle Download. The paperback is listed at £6.66.
274 pages
Fiction, Magic & Mystery, Romance
Indie Writer (Self-published)
Errors/Bug Bears:
A few, but nothing major (just annoying in the main)... I'm not too sure of the page numbers with the first few, but they are before page 16 I think.
Page ?: exactly go wander around - go and wander.
Page ?: Unless you want to finish up early - finish early.
Page 16: After completing her duties in back - it's just not an attractive sentence.
Page 25: Giovanni could even feel his posture relax they walked - as they walked.
Page 31: ...then come join us - come and join us.
Page 63: He could stop the laughter that burst out - could not stop.
Page 95/96: ...but she knew Carwyn could her her because
Page 206: Lorenzo would come visit her - [insert sigh here].
Page 208: Maybe I would have gotten married. Gotten a cat ... - uck.
Page 208: ... come save you - uck.
Page 210: ...growing taller and elevating them just under edge of the cliff - just under the edge of the cliff.
Page 218: ... go wash some of this dust off - it drives me batty.
Page 228: Go get dressed - again!
Page 234: He stopped writing Giuliana - it's only one extra word, I am beginning to think I'm unreasonable to expect conjunctions. If I see too many in any one piece it puts me off, and it gets marked down.
Happy reading.
Hugs
Kay
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