The Story of Our Life by Shari Low
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
By and large this was quite enjoyable, but I had a big problem with the authenticity of the dialogue, it felt very American with many conjunctions missing - this did not match up to the characters and their demographic. This is quite disappointing for a seasoned author, so I knocked off a star.
Apart from that it was an okay read, but the plot felt a little ponderous at times.
If you're not looking for startling prose, but fully open to a holiday read format, give it a go.
Errors/Bug Bears/Highlights:
Location 69: 'squeeze in nine holes in before dinner.'
Location 1017: '...buying into in the joke.'
Locoation 4382: '...truth in on my face.'
Purchased as part of my Kindle Unlimited deal, you can get a copy HERE.
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