My Lord Wicked by Cheryl Bolen
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Purchased as Kindle Unlimited as a Box Set Compilation: 'Gentlemen Always Play Fair'. In the box set it is location to 4404.
This is the first in that set, and I am hoping that the remainder of them will be more interesting and less predictable and Americanised attempt an an historical romantic novel - granted, it's not the worst one I've read, but it was far from the best either.
There were several errors, and the usual lack of conjunctions, I knocked off a star from its ultimate rating beause of this.
As usual, the errors/bug bears, and in this case no highlights are:-
Location 1428: 'I have come to gt your permission have Bay Lady saddled'
Location 2212: 'She slid her feet to the steps and count.'
Location 2954: ' ... to lep from he sofa and trot over to the window, where he leaped upon it sill.'
Location 2998: '... Morton while his brother played at host.'
Location 3102: '... him being the head of the family and all.' [insert snot of derision here!]
Location 3571: '... he wrote him.' [insert further snort]
Location 3733: '... and gladly took the drank he offered.'
Location 4034: 'Never had he sullied the memory of the lovely blond with the dancing the blue eyes.'
I will do a separate review for the other books in the box set. Each will get a star rating, and then at the end I will also rate the entire box set.
Happy reading.
Kay
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