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Tuesday, 29 October 2013

#395 ~ Fifty Shades of Alice in Wonderland

Fifty Shades of Alice in Wonderland  (Fifty Shades of Alice Trilogy #1)Fifty Shades of Alice in Wonderland by Melinda DuChamp

My rating: 3 of 5 stars





One of my DSOAs' from the end of March 2013, I've had this kicking around on my Kindle ... and been itching to read it.

A very tongue in cheek (actually many tongues' in more places than that) take on Fifty Shades, meets Alice Wonderland somewhere in Ann Summers. I have to admit though that I am probably one of the very few women around that hasn't read Fifty Shades - I read the reviews and decided that it wasn't for me - not because of the erotica, but the quality of the writing.

This piece of fiction was different, both titillating and frothy piece, and although yes the content is erotica, there was nothing too icky or cringe-worthy in it. I wonder if Amazon are going to sell the wheels?

On the whole a nicely written piece, and I would certainly read the other 2 books in the trilogy.

3 stars from me, and a highly commended piece of cover work too, that would make a nice standalone print!


Product Description:

As mentioned above I downloaded a free Kindle file back in March of this year, but at the time of writing this post it is listed HERE for £1.95, there is also an Audio version available for £11.14.

The books forms part of the Fifty Shades of Alice Trilogy, I will update the Review by Series section with the details of the other books.

Published by:    Indie Writer/Self Published
Pages:             115 pages
Reading Age:    Adult 18+ as contains overt sexual content and erotica
Genre:             Fiction > Contemporary > Erotica


Errors/Bug Bears:

Loc 1008:  Alice wasn't sure what to say, what to.  No one had ever kicked her there before.

Correct to:  Alice wasn't sure what to say, what to.  No one had ever kicked her there before.

Loc 1063:  He took hold of his manhood and lifted it, then he straddled her hear and lowered him other parts .....

I think it should be corrected to:  He took hold of his manhood and lifted it, then he straddled her head and lowered him other parts .....

Happy reading.

Hugs

Kay






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