#392 ~ Summer's Storm

Summer's Storm by Denise Domning

My rating: 4 of 5 stars














Possibly not so good as Autumn's Flame, which was Book 4 in her series) - that having been said it was still a good read. Nice simple plot, gentle pace and sweet characters.

As you can see from the fact that I've read Book 4, and now this one, that it is possible to read the series out of order.

The Author's attention to historical details is first class, and she shows such care in the way she crafts the story.

I wish she also took as much care with ensuring there are no typographical/grammatical errors. Unfortunately, you can find a couple of errors, but taken as a whole they didn't distract from the actual overall feel of the piece. For anyone interested there's a comprehensive list of errors and bug bears on my actual Blog Post.

Product details:

Indie Writer (Self-published)

You can purchase your copy at Amazon HERE.  Unfortunately, it is no longer available as a free download unless you are a Prime Member.

384 pages in length.

Book #2 in the Graistan Chronicles - see Review for Series for details of the other books I've read.

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Errors/Bug Bears:

3%:  "Philippa of Lindhurst replied quietly to the cleric question"

Correct to:  

Philippa of Lindhurst replied quietly to the cleric's question

15%:  "That she judged herself less than the beauty she was stung Temeric"

A comma is required, so correct to:

That she judged herself less than the beauty she was, stung Temeric

16%:  "Beside her, Temric laugh aloud"

Correct to:

Beside her, Temric laughed aloud

18%:  "She needs you to come visit"

The ever missing conjunction with North American writers'.  Strictly speaking it should be corrected to:

She needs you to come and visit

23%:  "It was a heady feeling, much like the aftereffects of the strong wine she'd consumed yesterday"

Space missing, correct to:

It was a heady feeling, much like the after effects of the strong wine she'd consumed yesterday

31%:  Ilsa's dancing around back there because she wishes I'd sit and rest

Just badly expressed, correct to:

Ilsa's dancing around behind us because she wishes I'd sit and rest

32%:  "Roger was going to attack sister!"

Correct to:

Roger was going to attack her Sister!

33%:  "I ought to go tell him ...."

Another conjunction missing.  Correct to:

I ought to go and tell him

43%:  "... then Edith appeared its doorway"

Correct to:

... then Edith appeared in its doorway

48%:  "Do you truly think he'll complain when the bishop names his widower?"

Within the context of the sentence it's the wrong word.  Correct to:

Do you truly think he'll complain when the bishop names him widower?

For the following two I forgot to make a note of the percentage, but they were near the end of the book.

".... of its great pride by leaning into Temric's should as if to say the Master had been truly missed."

Correct to:

shoulder

"Mye, I don't think Lindhurst will do them any harm ...."

Correct to:

Me, I don't think Lindhurst will do them any harm ....


Happy reading.

Hugs

Kay